New Storyboards

Here are the new storyboards. Upon viewing the first, it was felt that

a) it was too long and complicated to do all those first-person shots and

b) it was still focusing too much on the character and not on the environment.

Hence we came up with the idea of filming it as if the guy himself is filming it with a camera. This approach allowed us to accomplish simple camera pans and to use the tool of the person turning off the camera and re shooting from another point in the restaurant. This gives us full use of the environment and the only bits of the character that is seen is his arms.